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You have decided to enter a short story compet

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You have decided to enter a short story competition. The rules say that the story must begin with the following sentence:
I couldn"t believe my eyes when I opened the front door.
Write your story in 120 words.请帮忙给出正确答案和分析,谢谢!

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正确答案:I couldn't believe my eyes when I opened the front door. When I had left home that morning the house had been clean and tidy. Now everything was lying on the floor in a terrible mess. There were books on the carpet and all the drawers in my desk had been opened and the papers scattered round the room. I realized at once that I had been burgled. I rushed to the telephone to call the police. They told me to keep calm and not to touch anything.I decided to take a look round to see what had been stolen. The TV was still there and so was the video. I went into my bedroom and that seemed to be completely untouched. The mess was only in the sitting room. I couldn't understand why especially as nothing was missing.Suddenly there was a knock on the door and my sister was standing there with her little boy Tom. 'oh dear' she exclaimed. 'Yes' I said 'isn't it terrible? I've called the police and they are on their way.' Tom suddenly threw himself into my arms. "I'm sorry" he said. "It was me it was me!"
I couldn't believe my eyes when I opened the front door. When I had left home that morning the house had been clean and tidy. Now, everything was lying on the floor in a terrible mess. There were books on the carpet and all the drawers in my desk had been opened and the papers scattered round the room. I realized at once that I had been burgled. I rushed to the telephone to call the police. They told me to keep calm and not to touch anything.I decided to take a look round to see what had been stolen. The TV was still there and so was the video. I went into my bedroom and that seemed to be completely untouched. The mess was only in the sitting room. I couldn't understand why, especially as nothing was missing.Suddenly, there was a knock on the door and my sister was standing there with her little boy, Tom. 'oh, dear,' she exclaimed. 'Yes,' I said, 'isn't it terrible? I've called the police and they are on their way.' Tom suddenly threw himself into my arms. "I'm sorry," he said. "It was me, it was me!"

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